Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that advertising products can attract people easily to buy them. Whilst the opponents of this statement believe that people do not even buy items after watching or seeing the advertisements of them. From my point of view, the former state is true because of the structure of ads and promotions, however, many know that adds mostly exaggerate products.
To begin with, there are people who truly purchase things after seeing the ads of them on television and newspapers. The main reason is thet the ads are made to attract people by showing them only benefits and good sides. Furthermore, they often include some celebrities to be even more popular. For instance, there is a men perfume that is promoted by a famous football player and almost all the fans of football buy only that product. Thus, advertising can persuade some people to buy things.
Admittedly, these days majority of peole are aware of the fact that products are not the same as it is shown on their ads and so do not spend their time on watching the adds of products even though this was common in the past. However, children are likely to be attracted by ads easily. This is the reason that most ads are colorful and include characters that children like. Although adults know that advertisements are only to attract, they buy things for their children when the letter asks to buy to them. Therefore, most people know that adds are useless and do not take it serious.
By way of conclusion, i personally consider that ads are great weapon to encourage people to purchase goods but there are still those who do not pay attention to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7323943662 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50824864154 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514084507042 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0353125329 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196082117672 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779897481033 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739968014395 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126503929495 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335524168064 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.