City-dwellers have always enjoyed comprehensive education, pioneer job opportunities. This has always attracted young scholar to compete at the same level. I believe this to be a positive development, the below essay will discuss the reasons why people chose to move away from country side and elaborate on its advantages.
To embark on, government has always preferred to invest more on cities rather than the country side, leaving the country-dwellers to compromise on their education and life style. However, the contemporary society rewards those with a desire to achieve success despite their obvious draw backs. Subsequently, to achieve an hierarchy of success young country dwellers would have to clutch any opportunity presented to them. Consequently, there is an increasing trend of young country folks perceiving their higher education, securing jobs amounts the city dwellers. Many of the government bodies have been established around urban areas, moreover, this also encourages multinational corporate companies to invest in and around the cities, ergo, the demand for man power is increased, thereby, creating more demand which could be fulfilled by the migrates from the rural areas. For example, Bangalore is well known as the silicon city of India, technological hub for the opportunist, additionally, we can see a lot of people who have migrated from smaller cities or villages residing in this city for educational purpose or to perceive their respected career.
Furthermore, by moving to urban areas country people would have better opportunities to obtain a comprehensive education, perceive a career which would be impossible if they had chosen otherwise, moreover, this also helps the rural areas to develop. A person who has a secure job would send back capital to his kin/parents, this would help them improve economical standard, thereby, aiding to improve the country side. For instance, studies have shown small villages around Bangalore have improved their life style and economic status, contributory to surge in multinational companies investing in Bangalore city, opening up ample jobs to attract a lot of country folks towards the city.
To summarize, migration of country-dwellers could be contributed to lack of funds and inadequate budget by the government for the development of rural areas, however, by migrating to the cities young scholar could improve their chances to have a well-rounded education and work environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... or to perceive their respected career. Furthermore, by moving to urban areas co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52506596306 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06426185438 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564643799472 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.0412221116 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.076923077 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1538461538 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215533415525 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770280344858 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043153413609 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137398649167 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243185325102 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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