The term ' global warming' made some significant impact in peoples mind with relate to the energy sources they use. Most of the countries are heavily depending up on fossil fuels for power generation even though it is very harmful for our environment. As a result of global warming effects many countries considering nuclear power as an alternative solution for this problem and a good option for fulfilling the ever increasing energy requirement. I do agree with this thought to certain extent.
On one hand, nuclear energy has many advantages as compared to traditional energy sources. Firstly, it is a renewable energy source, so we don't need to worry about the depletion and reserve factors. For instance, fossil fuels are non- renewable once, the more we use as fast it will become perish. Secondly, nuclear power is quite environment friendly, it doesn't emmit any carbon dioxide content in to the atmosphere. It is more cleaner energy than the traditional energy sources. Last but not least, atomic energy's mass to energy production is very high, which means with small amount of atomic content we can produce enough power to lighten the entire city.
On the flip side of the coin. It does also have disadvantages as well. The contents of nuclear energy does make great threat to every living forms on the earth. It's radioactive waves or radiation causes deadly diseases like cancer, if it's contained properly. For example, Japan faced a catastrophe when the tsunamis struck one of it's nuclear power plant in Fukushima. As a result there was a leak in the plant, the area declared as radioactive zone, resulted in mass relocation of natives from that area. But still that area is kept as an quarantine area, indicating that no life forms survive over there. Moreover, the protection of nuclear power plants are very risky. Nowadays terrorist are aiming these kind of facilities as weapon of mass destruction.
In conclusion, atomic energy is best solution to the energy deficiency that the world has facing right now. Also it is the perfect solution to the environmental problems that we are facing right now. Though there are some disadvantages as well, so proper running and establishment of these kind if facilities should be guaranteed.
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- government investment in the arts such as music and theatre is a waste of money. government must invest this money in public services instead. to what extend do you agree with this statement? 68
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The term global warming made some significant imp...
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...sources they use. Most of the countries are heavily depending up on fossil fuels for power generation...
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... it is a renewable energy source, so we dont need to worry about the depletion and r...
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...power is quite environment friendly, it doesnt emmit any carbon dioxide content in to ...
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...ide content in to the atmosphere. It is more cleaner energy than the traditional energy sour...
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...at area. But still that area is kept as an quarantine area, indicating that no lif...
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...uction. In conclusion, atomic energy is best solution to the energy deficiency that ...
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...running and establishment of these kind if facilities should be guaranteed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04021447721 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69990361823 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573726541555 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2739898787 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4545454545 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9545454545 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18253854801 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506388331714 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517583227917 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10442311981 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578719106614 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.