As people have grown richer, they have started using their own mode of transportation instead of public transport. The importance of trains and buses have reduced to a great extent in the past years. The government has a very important role to play in this regard.
I think public transport got importance in people's eye in the past century. In those days, people usually had no money to buy their own vehicle or bike to travel, so they used mostly public transport to travel from one place to another. As the world progressed, more people had enough money to buy their own cars. That is why people use their own cars and most of the time they feel more comfortable in their own car than on a bus.
Aside from the fact about money, several factors affect people to buy their own cars and vegans. Firstly, In the west, It has become a necessity to buy a car for daily use because they think without a car it is very difficult to travel. Secondly, when people have their own mode of transportation, it helps them to save a lot of time which is one of the most important assets of the modern world. Thirdly, some people are introverts and they don't like to make any kind of social contact with the public. So they usually don't like to be surrounded by many people and avoid them.
As far as the government is concerned in this matter, I think the government can attract people to use public transport to a great extent. Different strategies must be adopted to make people use this source of transportation. First of all, it should lower the prices of buses' fare so that more people prefer to use them. It can also be changed by raising awareness about the environmental pollution caused by people's cars. Moreover, the government should initiate a campaign about the awareness of Carbon Mono Oxide released by the engines of the cars.
- Nowadays many people prefer to use their own cars to commute rather than buses and trains Why do you think this is happening What can the government do to change it 56
- Some people consider thinking about the future and planning for the future to be a waste of time They argue that people should simply live in the moment Do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ly, some people are introverts and they dont like to make any kind of social contact...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...al contact with public. So they usually dont like to be sorrounded by many people an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, i think, kind of, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54925373134 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48074608457 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49552238806 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8494469515 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.6470588235 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292591660548 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993937800522 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606682399092 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180848583247 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338813094582 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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