more and more students choose to go to other country for their higher education do you think the benefits out with the problems associated with it
In this present era, going to another nuisance for learning is on-trend. Numbers of pupils select to go to foreign countries for their post-graduation or master degrees. This essay will enshrine both aspects of this phenomena and also give my opinion about which side dominant the most, which described in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, plenty of benefits of this situation. First and foremost, students went to another nation for teaching, they get various information about that country's culture, which will help to develop their culture and lifestyle. Furthermore, students get accurate and correct knowledge from well-known universities, which located abroad. That will increase their information as well as income. For example, The most successful businessman Ratan Tata and Mukesh Ambani completed their study in the USA and the UK respectively.
On the other hand, this situation has a plethora of drawbacks, Which harm the society. Firstly, if students went to another country for their academic career, then they did not come back to their home nation, which will reduce businesses in that country. Ultimately the economy of that nation decline. Secondly, talented students can not willing to come back because they get a reasonable job there, which will reduce the growth of their country. For instance, 75% of scientist in NASA is from India, and they cannot improve their own country's situation in that field.
To conclude, although going to another nation for the study is beneficial, it has more demerits than merits. That will decline businesses and the growth of a nation. In my words, the advantages do not outweigh the disadvantages.
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31698113208 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7516291818 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577358490566 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7330010062 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200901984634 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658441027932 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482302791009 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118873212246 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198217657046 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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