Dear sir/madam,
I am writing to apply for job in your company it is position suitable for me. The notice for hiring has come to my notice when I reffered the newspaper yesterday. this is my dream work in your organisation.
I am Smith, actually I have done my post graduation in the business management from Guru Nanak University with flying colors (88%), as well as I also cleared my bachelor in the same university,On the top of the that internship training also organised by university in both terms which gave practical knowledge which play an instrumental rule in order to gain more profit for company, Therefore I would utilize my knowledge to make your company more profitable.
I will appreciate to you if you choose for me this position I will prove an assets for your organisation.
I am waiting for your primitive response and look forward hear from you.
Your faithfully,
xyz
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or me. The notice for hiring has come to my notice when I reffered the newspaper ...
^^
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...hen I reffered the newspaper yesterday. this is my dream work in your organisation. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng colors 88%, as well as I also cleared my bachelor in the same university,On th...
^^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , On
...ared my bachelor in the same university,On the top of the that internship training...
^^^
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I will appreciate to you if you choose for me this position I will prove an ass...
^^
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an asset' or simply 'assets'?
Suggestion: an asset; assets
...oose for me this position I will prove an assets for your organisation. I am waiting fo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...prove an assets for your organisation. I am waiting for your primitive response ...
^
Line 11, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hear from you. Your faithfully, xyz
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87012987013 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87910684038 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.718625796 44.8134815571 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239770271546 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124317718369 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627765157183 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150274132076 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061514718635 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or me. The notice for hiring has come to my notice when I reffered the newspaper ...
^^
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...hen I reffered the newspaper yesterday. this is my dream work in your organisation. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng colors 88%, as well as I also cleared my bachelor in the same university,On th...
^^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , On
...ared my bachelor in the same university,On the top of the that internship training...
^^^
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I will appreciate to you if you choose for me this position I will prove an ass...
^^
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an asset' or simply 'assets'?
Suggestion: an asset; assets
...oose for me this position I will prove an assets for your organisation. I am waiting fo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...prove an assets for your organisation. I am waiting for your primitive response ...
^
Line 11, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hear from you. Your faithfully, xyz
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87012987013 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87910684038 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.718625796 44.8134815571 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239770271546 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124317718369 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627765157183 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150274132076 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061514718635 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.