Now days the difficulty of life inforce people to perform a lot of tasks, some of persons believe that doing many tasks in the same time will decrease the chance of successful, other believe the opposite. In my perceptive I concur with the statement that doing so many different things in the same time, end with the very few thing doing well. In the following essay I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view
First, when individual incorporates with many things this will lead to decrease in their concentration, hence human being brain can focus in specific thing, and when we interrupt it with many tasks, it loss their function, furthermore, we cannot finish our work correctly, for example, when I was in high school, I had many academic subjects, and I enroll in basketball team, in addition to my part time job because I know very well that hard life necessitate us to do our best to be able to survive, but I was in last year of high school and I need to focus on my lesson, however, I overwhelmed with these many tasks, my score become worse, as you can see the effect of engaging in many works on our performance.
Moreover, doing a lot of affairs needs suitable time to complete them, as we know we have only 24 hours daily and this time not enough to do many works and if we doing so, that is mean we will not manage our time finish our job perfect, in the other hand the results will be not good, because we cannot do correct thing.
In conclusion, the statement is as persuasive as it stands, this is based on exposition that mentioned above, that doing many tasks in same time will result in doing few works well because individual cannot focus in many things in the same time, in addition, we do not have enough time to do many tasks.
Now days the difficulty of life inforce people to perform a lot of tasks, some of persons believe that doing many tasks in the same time will decrease the chance of successful, other believe the opposite. In my perceptive I concur with the statement that doing so many different things in the same time, end with the very few thing doing well. In the following essay I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view
First, when individual incorporates with many things this will lead to decrease in their concentration, hence human being brain can focus in specific thing, and when we interrupt it with many tasks, it loss their function, furthermore, we cannot finish our work correctly, for example, when I was in high school, I had many academic subjects, and I enroll in basketball team, in addition to my part time job because I know very well that hard life necessitate us to do our best to be able to survive, but I was in last year of high school and I need to focus on my lesson, however, I overwhelmed with these many tasks, my score become worse, as you can see the effect of engaging in many works on our performance.
Moreover, doing a lot of affairs needs suitable time to complete them, as we know we have only 24 hours daily and this time not enough to do many works and if we doing so, that is mean we will not manage our time finish our job perfect, in the other hand the results will be not good, because we cannot do correct thing.
In conclusion, the statement is as persuasive as it stands, this is based on exposition that mentioned above, that doing many tasks in same time will result in doing few works well because individual cannot focus in many things in the same time, in addition, we do not have enough time to do many tasks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46646341463 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44866805385 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484756097561 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.1344086022 323% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 235.847917099 48.9658058833 482% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.0 100.406767564 292% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.6 20.6045352989 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.8 5.45110844103 382% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384462497695 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.285085612414 0.076458572812 373% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208125370926 0.0737576698707 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276172306485 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.204754502186 0.0645574589148 317% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.4 11.7677419355 275% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 58.1214874552 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 10.1575268817 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.0537634409 279% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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