In some countries, young people tend to move out of the countryside and live in to the city while old people stay in the countryside. What is problem will the cause? What can be done to solve these problems what can be done to solve these problems: ?
In the 21 century, every person want to live in city‘s area because young people face ample number of problems in countryside. While old people think that countryside beneficial for everyone. However, the flabbergasting reality of the cities area which shows that million of individuals suffer from disease scarcity. There are umpteen number of reasons behind this phenomena as well as, there are several remedies solve this problem which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs
To commence with there are myriad of reasons that why people are moving into the city’s from countryside.Firstly, in some countries do not have a lot of amenities in countryside so that Massi’s move to cities because they want that their children will do study in superior schools and they get easily battery jobs and better remuneration in future life. Secondly, mostly people do not have work in countryside then they come to city area and do jobs and mostly all cities have different types of facilities like better education transport system et cetera. So that young people move out of the countryside because government do not provide a facility for those individuals who live in ruler areas.
However,There are numerous of solution for solving this problem dad who people moving to city’s area. Firstly, government should provide all genres of amenities in countryside because when people do face problems in ruler area then they think their city‘s are better than countryside. Moreover, government should spend more money on hospitals transport educational system. Secondly, in contemporary era, population is escalating day by day and aesthetics of the city it is not spic and span because there are many factories which create dangerous pollution so that those people who lives in cities they face many different types of disease but old people prefer to live in countryside because they know that if they live in the ruler area they can live for long life .
To conclude, according to this argument, mostly people support former live in cities area because city’s have a lot of facilities. However, government also should that provide equal type of facilities so that people cannot think for move to cities area .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18662952646 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7657334271 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476323119777 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.461971688 49.4020404114 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.166666667 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9166666667 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240002793395 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109255141232 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573945484431 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163389410404 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397593264196 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.