Some people think women should be given the same opportunity to work and excel just like men. Others believe that a woman’s responsibility should be limited to looking after children and housework. What is your opinion? Use relevant details and examples to support your choice.
Using plastic shopping bags contaminate the land and sea. Some people argue that using plastic bags should be prohibited. I partially agree to forbid the usage of plastic shopping bags.
On the one hand, plastic shopping bags are one of the main causes of environmental pollution. Because people are not aware of the quantity they consume. For instance, we spend many plastic materials in our lives from plastic bags to plastic bottles. People’s indiscretion act that using plastic bags is one of the biggest reasons for environmental contamination.
In addition, plastic bags and microplastic are harmful to sea animals. Because of similarity with their food like jellyfish or plankton, sea animals can easily confused with their prey . For example, years ago in the news, a marine biologist found heavy plastic bags and microplastics in the dead turtle’s body. The turtle devours plastic materials in the ocean because it just seems like a turtle's prey, a jellyfish.
On the other hand, plastic bags are highly acclaimed to people for its convenience. Because the plastic bag is the lightest and has high durability, people prefer to use plastic bags. For example, the report of Greenpeace shows us the annual usage of plastic materials, plastic bags is used almost 23.5 billion. Unfortunately, now plastic bags are perfectly permeated in our lives.
This essay has mainly discussed both sides about using plastic bags. Plastic bags are serviceable articles, but they are the main cause of environmental pollution and exert a bad effect to sea animals.
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- Some people think women should be given the same opportunity to work and excel just like men Others believe that a woman s responsibility should be limited to looking after children and housework What is your opinion Use relevant details and examples to s 11
- Some people think women should be given the same opportunity to work and excel just like men Others believe that a woman s responsibility should be limited to looking after children and housework What is your opinion Use relevant details and examples to s 73
- Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea Some people think they should be banned Do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...main causes of environmental pollution. Because people are not aware of the quantity th...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mals can easily confused with their prey . For example, years ago in the news, a m...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ears ago in the news, a marine biologist found heavy plastic bags and microplasti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26294820717 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79857014116 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4306846778 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7058823529 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0670710692946 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348689586132 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577960770812 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502455547833 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041639242562 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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