Dear Colleagues,
I would like to thank all of you for coming to my home last week for the celebration of my first marriage anniversary. This was a very special day of my life, and you guys have made it even more special by showering your love for me. I can't thank you guys enough for such an amazing gift, and my wife and I am delighted to receive the present.
The handmade greeting card, where everyone has written well wishes for us, is astonishing. Furthermore, the beautiful antique painting is the best present I have had ever received from anyone. Not only this painting looks very expensive, but it also shows that an extraordinary painting can be made by the use of organic colors and without any paintbrushes.
As I am an admirer of art and craft, I will showcase this piece of art in my drawing-room, and keep it safe for years. My wife and I were planning to buy some showpieces for the decoration of our house, and this gift fulfilled our requirements. I have also framed the greeting card and planning to keep it in my bedroom.
Once again, thank you for being a part of this important occasion and presenting such beautiful gifts.
Warm Wishes,
Peter
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...special by showering your love for me I cant thank you guys enough for such an amazi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50236966825 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56716344625 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587677725118 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 211.0 16.3608247423 1290% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 950.0 76.5299724578 1241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 211.0 16.8248392259 1254% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 49.0 4.34317383033 1128% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175073703178 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175073703178 0.0766984524023 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105838815227 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726560696318 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 105.3 8.37731958763 1257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -125.77 70.7449484536 -178% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 83.2 7.45979381443 1115% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.3 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.5 7.59969072165 217% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 86.4 8.54432989691 1011% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 8.15463917526 662% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...special by showering your love for me I cant thank you guys enough for such an amazi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50236966825 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56716344625 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587677725118 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 211.0 16.3608247423 1290% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 950.0 76.5299724578 1241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 211.0 16.8248392259 1254% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 49.0 4.34317383033 1128% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175073703178 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175073703178 0.0766984524023 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105838815227 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726560696318 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 105.3 8.37731958763 1257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -125.77 70.7449484536 -178% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 83.2 7.45979381443 1115% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.3 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.5 7.59969072165 217% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 86.4 8.54432989691 1011% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 8.15463917526 662% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.