Organizing high profit athletic event is considered to be advantages by a overwhelming majority of people. Even though some do not agree with this notion, I firmly am of the opinion that this could booster the country economically. Below paragraphs will discuss my beliefs.
Hosting mega events indubitably result in nation becoming a tourist attraction. When people from around the globe travel to experience this event, they, not only purchase tickets, but also have to invest in hotels and other commodities. Furthermore, for a country to host this mega event they will need man power, which can be full-filled by the local unemployed population. Foe instance, 2010 Olympics was hosted BY UK. Thousands of sports fans invested big chunk of money to London; resultantly , it blosters that province's economical condition by 20%, besides, for hosting the event, many where employed to host this mega event. Thus, these people are in favor of this phenomenon as it helps accelerate the economy and the employment rate.
meanwhile, there are some masses who are in disharmony with these assertion. They are convinced that these high-profile sports even will not only impose security threats, but also causes environmental distortion. For the entire time the country will be at security risk for terrorist. The host country must deploy military forces, around the clock investing astronomical amount of finance. However, these individuals assert that these funds can be better ameliorated to the other parts of the country, such as infrastructure, education, impoverishment. Moreover, tourists do not respect the local environment, they through garbage without hesitation, thereby, degrading the natural beauty. In short taking these risks into account, some mortals strongly oppose this concept.
Conclusively, despite the obvious drawbacks these events bring to the table, I firmly regard it to be a positive move.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, thus, while, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34006734007 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75418817343 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632996632997 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 297.0 20.2975951904 1463% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1586.0 106.682146367 1487% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 297.0 20.7667163134 1430% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 86.0 7.06120827912 1218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166888168485 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166888168485 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968052923905 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446330184705 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 152.2 13.0946893788 1162% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -238.44 50.2224549098 -475% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 120.3 11.3001002004 1065% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.17 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.63 8.58950901804 275% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 120.8 10.1190380762 1194% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 121.0 10.7795591182 1122% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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