The world's biggest problem nowadays remains the ratio of the starving population. Several hundred years ago it had reasonable causes, such as poor agriculture technologies and little scientific progress, although it appears debatable now. This essay will discuss possible reasons and probable solution for this issue.
The capitalistic present world continues to extend the gap between developed and developing countries, along with the one between poor and rich people, where the latter contains less than 1% of the world population. The gap leads to poor countries becoming poorer, since the world corporations steal fossils, as it happens in Africa, or labor, like it is in China, therefore the vicious circle happens due to the inability of countries of the third world to become richer. Additionally, leading nations like the USA or Russia create conflicts that end up with wars, which also have harmful effects.
The main thing society can do to slow down the starve problem is to invest in charity funds, in spite of its ineffectiveness in long term. The middle class is not able to change the world fully and to make everyone equal right now. The manufacturers need to begin conscious consumption and production, for example, produce as much food as the population of developed countries demands since all the waste products are not utilized to feed people, who can not afford it.
In conclusion, the issue appeared due to structural changes of the whole world, thus its best solution will be also obtained from other ones. The only option that remained to people from the middle class is to offer money to charities and have an active position.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the biggest'.
Suggestion: worlds the biggest
The worlds biggest problem nowadays remains the ratio of t...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...wars which also have harmful effects The main thing society can do to slow down ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... main thing society can do to slow down the starve problem is to invest in charity funds i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, third, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00735294118 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59640047281 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 272.0 20.2975951904 1340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1362.0 106.682146367 1277% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 272.0 20.7667163134 1310% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 86.0 7.06120827912 1218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14768319144 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14768319144 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836465180531 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309873651051 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 138.2 13.0946893788 1055% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -204.6 50.2224549098 -407% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 109.4 11.3001002004 968% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.26 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.42 8.58950901804 249% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 110.8 10.1190380762 1095% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.7795591182 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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