Some people say that parents should control their children behavior from a very young age. what do you think?
Undoubtedly, parenting is not an easy task, it takes a lot of efforts to nurture the children for proper nourishments and learning. It is often said that pupils learning begins at a very young age, I agree with this view. Children who come across the development of the habits and also their likes and dislikes various activities are cultivated at small age itself.
Good habits inculcated at young age is accepted by the pupils without any objection. Research shows that habits like reading must be developed as early as possible, otherwise, it is precluded when one becomes old and brain resists from developing new activities. These days it is seen that older generation still prefers reading over watching on screens when compared to the younger generation which is a great example of habit development at young age. So it is quite necessary to pursue juveniles at the right age for positive development.
Personal choices are developed based on the feed given at small age. For example, children who were given home-cooked food and habitual of eating fruits and vegetables had a better upbringing in terms of health, and also never insisted upon eating junk food when grown-up. Furthermore, the pupils who played on field have developed the routine to play certain sports when younger, instead of watching television and sleeping on weekends. Thus, guiding and motivation play a crucial role in beneficial growth of the child.
In my opinion, the maturing of children process is vital for their behaviour developed once they are young enough to understand the world and live the luminous life based on the proper upbringing at their immature age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99267399267 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60267687733 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 273.0 20.2975951904 1345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1363.0 106.682146367 1278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 273.0 20.7667163134 1315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 66.0 7.06120827912 935% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142825542056 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142825542056 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993443387579 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503196281294 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 138.6 13.0946893788 1058% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -205.62 50.2224549098 -409% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 109.8 11.3001002004 972% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.14 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.82 8.58950901804 242% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 111.2 10.1190380762 1099% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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