Many people living in cities these days do not get enough physical exercise.
What are the causes of this?
Since the technology has progressed by leaps and bounds, inactive lifestyle has been adopted by masses residing in urban areas today. This scenario is bound to ample of reasons but the prominent ones would be, firstly, the emergence of sedentary way of living and, secondly, being occupied with loads of work.
Initiating with the principle factor of insufficient exercising, today, people aspire to have utmost convenience and comfort in every way possible, therefore, they have employed gizmos which run as per the instructions of humans. As a result, the tasks which involved human engagement in physical terms have been overtaken by machines and ultimately, making them potato couches. Its best example would be the rate of obesity among housewives that has proliferated dramatically in past decade due to the introduction of robots which take cares of all household chores. Thereby, the lavish life of city is the root cause of being less active.
Apart from this, this 21st century is era of competitiveness where every individuals is running a rat race to reach the pinnacle point. Due to this, they strive to work so hard that they are left with no time to exercise or engage in any other forms of workout. Even, it has become rather common that the culture of working 8-hours shift is a thing of past as the employees are found in offices for prolonged hours. This can be better illustrated with the working scenario of MNC’s whose office premises functions 24*7 and hundreds of its workers are conspicuous there every time. Thus, working round the clock has robbed time of exercising from people’s life.
To reiterate, it can be an undeniable fact that fast-paced life of metropolis has made the people unhealthy as they only desire luxury which reduces their efforts. However, this phenomena would have devastating impact in long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
... cause of being less active Apart from this this 21st century is era of competitiveness ...
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Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ury which reduces their efforts However this phenomena would have devastating impact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, apart from, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93137254902 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59477329975 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62091503268 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 306.0 20.2975951904 1508% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1509.0 106.682146367 1414% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 306.0 20.7667163134 1474% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 103.0 7.06120827912 1459% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127071640584 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127071640584 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683032788238 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195802465939 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 154.8 13.0946893788 1182% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -239.11 50.2224549098 -476% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 122.6 11.3001002004 1085% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.51 8.58950901804 274% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 124.4 10.1190380762 1229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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