Some people argue that buying a house is more important than renting one. While various causes can be addressed for this notion, I believe that owning a house is more beneficial for individuals than governments.
Several factors account for the preferences of people to own a house. The first is the financial condition among governments and nations are changing, and individuals are exposed to the risks incurred by these changes. Therefore, the best scenario to safeguard themselves is to possess their accommodation. Bearing in mind that the housing expenditure is considered the majority of living costs, another reason for buying a house is to cut these expenses. Although the action might involve receiving loans from the government, this can be seen as a long-life investment, which leads to better living conditions after retirement.
Numerous benefits and drawbacks can be considered for the ownership of a house. For instance, one negative side of this idea is the heavy debts by allocating loans, which is a burden on the governments and might cause economic catastrophes like that of 2008. Furthermore, the slogan of welfare provided by loans which is usually made by authorities is a misconception. As the lower-classes who earn minimum wage, may not afford to devote their income to purchase a house. While affluent individuals who are the landlords would benefit from rents they receive and become wealthier in the long run, the tenants get poorer over time, widening the gap between the two social classes.
In conclusion, beside the fact that buying a house would be advantageous for people, providing them with financial security and retirement benefits, in the big picture, this idea might influence society negatively, from economic and social perspectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20141342756 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83207556831 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 283.0 20.2975951904 1394% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1472.0 106.682146367 1380% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 283.0 20.7667163134 1363% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 78.0 7.06120827912 1105% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209087137746 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209087137746 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148941557312 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647514250641 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 144.6 13.0946893788 1104% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -224.23 50.2224549098 -446% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 114.8 11.3001002004 1016% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.36 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.08 8.58950901804 257% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 115.2 10.1190380762 1138% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 115.0 10.7795591182 1067% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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