Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Other thinks that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many Individuals are working in different industries for various companies throughout their life to earn money by which they can improve their standard of living. Many people confer that working people should work only for one organization from beginning to end while some argue that changing jobs over different companies could benefit them in many possible ways. I closely enquired both views and in my opinion, switching workmanship has more consequences that shall i concive in ensuing paragraphs.
Expertise comes with experience and with expertise one can achieve like anything. By contributing to a particular organization over the life, one can create expertise in a work and that would help both the company and to an individual. For Instance, It has been seen in manufacturing industry that workers who are working in a company for longer than 35 years gives more productivity compare to less experienced employees. High productivity and production rates in turn gives more profit to company hence, workers get higher income because of their skillset and experience.
Although, Moving to different organization have considerable advantages. First and Foremost one is enhancement of Knowledge and skills which an employee they gain by experiencing and doing work in different companies. Secondly, Experience gained by working in various corporations creates more career opportunities. Moreover, It has been seen that people who are changing jobs frequently benefited by higher remuneration compared to others.
To conclude, In order to earn ample amount of money, opportunities, skills and many other advantages, It is always advisable to change organizations after stipulated time despite few merits that although underweighs advantages of working in a same company over a lifespan.
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...orking in a same company over a lifespan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48175182482 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01079849215 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 274.0 20.2975951904 1350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1502.0 106.682146367 1408% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 274.0 20.7667163134 1319% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 89.0 7.06120827912 1260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345134404138 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.345134404138 0.084324248473 409% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206150750485 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080708764821 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 141.4 13.0946893788 1080% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -223.55 50.2224549098 -445% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 112.5 11.3001002004 996% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.98 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.49 8.58950901804 250% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 111.6 10.1190380762 1103% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.7795591182 529% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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