Some people say that in future people will go on holidays abroad and others say they will spend vacations in home country.
Discuss both views n give ur opinion
Travelling is one of the most cultivating activities since ancient time. A few human indicate that in upcoming era, people will holidaying foreign countries whereas some individuals reckon that vacations would be spent in own nation. While I agree with first view, due to higher financial standard person will love to fly abroad, rather than exploring own country which they might feel similar to their own country.
To initiate with, the prominent reason for foreign trip would be financial freedom. In coming era, not only one will have higher income but also they would be more adventurous to visit any place with thrill. For example, my grandfather was not able to either travel far areas or own country, owing to limited finance. In addition to this, in future people would have highly sophisticated transport system which will make person tremendously eager to travel to other countries. Eventually, one will love to travel more than recent time.
On the contrary, why people may like to vacation in own country, the primary reason is they might have sort of time which make them to travel for a short period. For instance, one survey of Times of India said that in future one will be forced to work more than one job or may require to work for longer hours, because of own desire to earn more. Another reason is terrorist attack which occurs on every month. If you travel by flight, then you have highest chances to face such incidents. Ultimately, people will limit their travelling zeal.
According to my opinion, now the most of families are nuclear, hence they have time to travel other countries with less expense and less responsibilities.
In conclusion, although people will travel abroad, a few human may travel in own country. I ponder that people will travel abroad for most excursions.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'holiday'
Suggestion: holiday
...dicate that in upcoming era people will holidaying foreign countries whereas some individu...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
... month If you travel by flight then you have highest chances to face such incidents Ultimate...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the families') or simply say ''most families''.
Suggestion: most of the families; most families
...g zeal According to my opinion now the most of families are nuclear hence they have time to tra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun responsibilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...l other countries with less expense and less responsibilities In conclusion althou...
^^^^
Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h less expense and less responsibilities In conclusion although people will trave...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, then, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82295081967 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39847662842 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534426229508 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 305.0 20.2975951904 1503% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1471.0 106.682146367 1379% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 305.0 20.7667163134 1469% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 139.0 7.06120827912 1969% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237496714539 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237496714539 0.084324248473 282% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157241263258 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526388166896 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 153.8 13.0946893788 1175% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -229.64 50.2224549098 -457% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 121.1 11.3001002004 1072% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.16 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.39 8.58950901804 261% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 124.0 10.1190380762 1225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 154.0 10.7795591182 1429% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'holiday'
Suggestion: holiday
...dicate that in upcoming era people will holidaying foreign countries whereas some individu...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
... month If you travel by flight then you have highest chances to face such incidents Ultimate...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the families') or simply say ''most families''.
Suggestion: most of the families; most families
...g zeal According to my opinion now the most of families are nuclear hence they have time to tra...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun responsibilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...l other countries with less expense and less responsibilities In conclusion althou...
^^^^
Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h less expense and less responsibilities In conclusion although people will trave...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, then, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82295081967 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39847662842 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534426229508 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 305.0 20.2975951904 1503% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1471.0 106.682146367 1379% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 305.0 20.7667163134 1469% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 139.0 7.06120827912 1969% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237496714539 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237496714539 0.084324248473 282% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157241263258 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526388166896 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 153.8 13.0946893788 1175% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -229.64 50.2224549098 -457% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 121.1 11.3001002004 1072% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.16 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.39 8.58950901804 261% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 124.0 10.1190380762 1225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 154.0 10.7795591182 1429% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.