There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.
Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:
• describe what the problem with the changing rooms is
• say what happened the last times you complained
• explain what you want the manager to do.
Dear Mr.John,
I am Rehana Diwan and I am a veteran customer since 2016 with this centre. Unfotunately, I have complained myriad times for changing rooms’ hindarences but I have not got any success till now.
Well, I would like to draw some flaws which I have been facing. The first and foremost issue, is with lightings in the rooms. To be more precise, current light bulbs are working but all are as light as the nightangle. That’s why we loose some our precious things such as shocks, hair pins, cream, soap. Another major issue is with number of rooms. Though you have proper numbers, it needs more because with time your centre has grown rapidly. Due to this reason you have got good number of members. Hence, sometimes changing rooms teeming with members. Owing to this, it creates congestion.
Indeed, you have experienced and professional staffs still last time when I was complained them again, they were little rude to me and harshly told to me that these all are frivolous ideas which you are telling to us. Specially, Mr. Rachel, a management head, totally had forgotten who am I ?
I only need that these all problems should be solved as soon as possible and you should take detailed feedback from other members too. If you will take their feedback, you will be able to find the right solution and these improvements could become a strength for your centre’s development.
Hope you will consider my suggestion and will act promptly.
Yours sincerely,
Rehana Diwan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
Dear Mr.John, I am Rehana Diwan and I am a veteran ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, still, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85098039216 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49953303744 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674509803922 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.608507176 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7647058824 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298545974102 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822086691295 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740747250056 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135209579483 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661415086108 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.