You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbors to say goodbye to them and to thank for their help during your stay.
In your letter
• explain how they helped you
• say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived
• invite them to visit you at your new home.
Dear Mr Shah and Mr Trivedi,
I am writing this letter to say a final goodbye as you are knowing that we are shifting to a new house and I would like to convey heartily thank you for all your support not only in happy days but also on rainy days.
I can never forget what you all have done for us. I vividly remember that when I had to go for incremation in an emergency at far distance and I was in skeptical that Where can I drop my kids? Because usually, we avoid kids to accompany us during such sad situation. Then, you all were ready to take care of our kids and gave assurance that we can leave them in the house itself and you all will provide all necessary things such as food.
Well, I am going to miss our brotherhood and caring nature for each of us. I will also miss on special occasions which we used to celebrate together and shared all tasks from cooking to arranging chairs. Perhaps, I was the luckier person who has got such mesmerizing neighbours.
I would like to invite to all of you to visit my house. Because I would like to keep in touch with all of you for a lifetime. Either we stay nearby or far away. However, I also want to show you my dream house which I tended to describe to you during our talk. I have put all my efforts to make it comfortable.
Hope you all will visit soon.
Yours sincerely,
Rehana.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[4]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...is letter to say a final goodbye as you are knowing that we are shifting to a new house and...
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Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...is letter to say a final goodbye as you are knowing that we are shifting to a new house and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17307692308 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28015298459 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8460892687 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305970562618 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103067455205 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831366113506 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15321581945 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102266087438 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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