In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is impos,d, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
_ What is your opinion about this?
In these days, many countries in world are facing pandemic problem of COVID-19 due to which they have imposed curfew in those area which are much affected due to virus. US has announced night curfew in few areas where teenagers and children are restricted to go outside after particular time without their parents or guardians. I strongly agree with the notion as it will help to control the spread of virus caused by night parties.
To commence with the first idea, there are a myriad of things to be shared in its favor. first and Foremost, teenagers do night parties with their friends and in a large group. As a result, this would lead to spread of virus to non-affected people. Consequently, government will face more difficulties to provide health services to all the people among the country.
Secondly, young children cannot give much attention to towards precautions published by WHO such as wear face masks in bustling areas and use of sanitizers when they are going outside their homes. Hence, this would endanger their life as well others who will get in touch with them later. Moreover, government is doing lot of efforts in favor of their residents and people should also support the government to win this situation.
In the conclusion, I would like to infer that curfew helps to slow down the speed of infection spread. Moreover, adults are more aware about the disease and they can encourage adolescents to follow the guidelines issued by the authorities. To justify my state of mind, according to the survey, WHO has announced that the countries those took lockdown steps earlier are successful to slow down the number of infected cases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'those areas'?
Suggestion: this area; those areas
...ue to which they have imposed curfew in those area which are much affected due to virus US...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...ommence with the first idea there are a myriad of things to be shared in its favor fir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83629893238 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44744664106 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 281.0 20.2975951904 1384% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1359.0 106.682146367 1274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 281.0 20.7667163134 1353% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 96.0 7.06120827912 1360% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168318007818 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168318007818 0.084324248473 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951240898581 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663689255263 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 141.9 13.0946893788 1084% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -205.28 50.2224549098 -409% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 111.7 11.3001002004 988% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.17 8.58950901804 246% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 9.78957915832 531% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 114.4 10.1190380762 1131% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 52.0 10.7795591182 482% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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