In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
_ What is your opinion about this?
I strongly agree with the notion that teenagers can come outside with their guardians during curfew situation in United State. Several arguments surround my opinion.
To commence with there are number of benefits of curfew. First and Foremost, teenagers do night parties with their friends in a large group which will become a hot spot of virus infections. As a result, this would lead to spread of infection to non-affected people. The virus spread is life threatening for elders. Consequently, government would face more difficulties to provide health services to all the people among the country. In the recent study, a drop is seen on the graph of net new cases in Los Angeles.
Secondly, young children did not give much attention to towards guidelines published by government such wearing masks and hand-wash after a regular interval of time. Accompanied by adults can help to control this situation who can remind adolescents to take necessary actions. Instead of avoiding the rules, everyone should support the local authorities because these are doing lots of efforts in the favor of their citizens.
Finally, youngster can spend more time and enjoy with their families. So, this would be good time for them to talk with parents and help them to open with them.
In the conclusion, I would like to infer that curfew helps to slow down the speed of infection spread. Moreover, adults are more aware about the disease and they can encourage adolescents to follow the guidelines issued by the authorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...forts in the favor of their citizens Finally youngster can spend more time and enjoy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.996 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53578863472 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 250.0 20.2975951904 1232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1249.0 106.682146367 1171% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 250.0 20.7667163134 1204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 77.0 7.06120827912 1090% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135199605878 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135199605878 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713785761123 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00838651095445 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 127.1 13.0946893788 971% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -173.81 50.2224549098 -346% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 99.6 11.3001002004 881% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.2 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.76 8.58950901804 230% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 102.0 10.1190380762 1008% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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