Perspective between many people, Some believe about caging them while others think it is illogical to limit animal movements. In my opinion, I agree that animals must have free life same as humans do
One hand, basic reason to cage animal is, first, zoo protects endangered Species which are on the verge extinction as animal stay safe from predators, bad weather and they do not have to worry about the food. secondly, Park allow for many researchers and scientist to study behaviour of the animal so they could make new medical treatment against health problem associated with humans and animals as well . Thirdly, maintaining animal areas requires large numbes people ,As a result, Zoo provides employement and income to locals. Moreover as large proportion of visitor comes to exhibit the wildlife ,there money can raise for other conservation projects .
On the Other hand, it is crucial to consider that zoos are artificial environment where animals have chances to lose their instinct of hunting . Moreover we as a humans have no rights to use animals for the purpose of entertainment, however,it would be better to save extinct species by protecting their natural habitat. Furthermore zoo displays wildlife with the aim of making profit which is unethical and we cannot just earn money by use of natural resources.
To conclude, keeping animals in zoo might have many values but it is irrational to keep these animals away from their natural habitat.The reasons ate that besides they are not vulnerable creatures they have the right to survive independently because of having feelings and emotions as humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07604562738 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5704940671 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 263.0 20.2975951904 1296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1335.0 106.682146367 1251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 263.0 20.7667163134 1266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 153.0 7.06120827912 2167% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215053355539 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215053355539 0.084324248473 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129604388491 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453297672703 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 134.0 13.0946893788 1023% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -203.93 50.2224549098 -406% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 107.0 11.3001002004 947% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.66 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.0 8.58950901804 244% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 107.2 10.1190380762 1059% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 107.0 10.7795591182 993% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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