The continued rise in population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued cause ?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity.
Over the recent years, world population has been increasing at faster pace. Nowadays, Rise in population has been considered as greatest problem for humanity and in my opinion, its is indeed such a big problem for us. In this essay, i shall discuss the root causes of this issue in ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, there are many causes of this problem from which we are suffering now. first and foremost reason behind this is lack of awareness about family planning. In country like India, where major population of country lives in rural area does not know about the term family planning. their sole purpose to have a child is to have reputation in society. In suburbs males are judged by the number of children they have. for example, in a village of India, a person having 4 child has more dominance then person having single child.
Secondly, To have a son is a great thing in south asian countries like India. Child birth numbers are increasing because if mother gives a birth to a baby girl in their first pregnancy couple will plan to have a son in next and this goes on till they do not have a son. to cite an example, a laborer have 4 childrens; 3 elder girls and 1 younger boy. This clearly indicates couples are having more childrens to give a birth to male infant.
Moreover, Population growth could arise more problems for a nation. Poverty is one of them. Poverty will increase because of less no. of people will get jobs. High competition and lack of education are the major reasons behind the same. In India, population below poverty line has increased as population increased tremendously.
In conclusion, by close scrutiny, I strongly agree with the fact that population growth is greatest concern for humanity.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the greatest'.
Suggestion: is the greatest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62706270627 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42584360266 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557755775578 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 303.0 20.2975951904 1493% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1402.0 106.682146367 1314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 303.0 20.7667163134 1459% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 105.0 7.06120827912 1487% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176054785537 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176054785537 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116970711178 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868845087517 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 151.9 13.0946893788 1160% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -227.61 50.2224549098 -453% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 120.3 11.3001002004 1065% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.05 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.9 8.58950901804 255% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 123.2 10.1190380762 1218% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.7795591182 529% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...such a big problem for us In this essay i shall discuss the root causes of this i...
^
Line 2, column 471, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
...in a village of India a person having 4 child has more dominance then person having s...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 496, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...erson having 4 child has more dominance then person having single child Secondly To...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...childrens to give a birth to male infant Moreover Population growth could arise m...
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Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...m Poverty will increase because of less no of people will get jobs High competitio...
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Line 4, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sed as population increased tremendously In conclusion by close scrutiny I strong...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'scrutiny'.
Suggestion: scrutiny
...creased tremendously In conclusion by close scrutiny I strongly agree with the fact that pop...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...conclusion by close scrutiny I strongly agree with the fact that population growth is greatest concern f...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the greatest'.
Suggestion: is the greatest
...ee with the fact that population growth is greatest concern for humanity
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62706270627 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42584360266 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557755775578 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 303.0 20.2975951904 1493% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1402.0 106.682146367 1314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 303.0 20.7667163134 1459% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 105.0 7.06120827912 1487% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176054785537 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176054785537 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116970711178 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868845087517 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 151.9 13.0946893788 1160% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -227.61 50.2224549098 -453% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 120.3 11.3001002004 1065% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.05 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.9 8.58950901804 255% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 123.2 10.1190380762 1218% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.7795591182 529% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.