Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society ?
In recent years, it is impossible to deny the fact that science students have limited in comparison with another field. Likewise, people wonder that how many issues were caused by this trend. An upcoming essay will provide some explanation for this reason.
At first, students have a desired to be a successful man in a short time without being not too hard work and patience, while science requires a great deal of time devoted for studying, particularly in researching. Science students have to stick to university for 4-6 years and take specific course, training period,… to start their career path if they still have their passion. Secondly, engrossing in study means students have to minimize their leisure time to reap a benefits of searching.
Furthermore, governments must to launching a full- scale investigation to find out people and recruit them for their laboratories because science plays an important part in our life. For example, various kind of diseases is said to be harsh to find a medicine that lacking of scientists and specialists in this field are one of the reason for this problem. The less science experts, the more money invested in this this domain.
In conclusion, although the number of meritorious science student increased significantly, it’s not an impossible mission to resolve if governments maximize their profits and regard them as essential force.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a benefit' or simply 'benefits'?
Suggestion: a benefit; benefits
... to minimize their leisure time to reap a benefits of searching Furthermore governments ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure time to reap a benefits of searching Furthermore governments must to launchin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
...ence experts the more money invested in this this domain In conclusion although the numb...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...science student increased significantly its not an impossible mission to resolve if...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ofits and regard them as essential force
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72501353491 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635555555556 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 225.0 20.2975951904 1109% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1140.0 106.682146367 1069% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 225.0 20.7667163134 1083% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 105.0 7.06120827912 1487% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216483008676 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216483008676 0.084324248473 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123753156671 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493573565121 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 114.9 13.0946893788 877% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -156.9 50.2224549098 -312% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 91.0 11.3001002004 805% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.61 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.08 8.58950901804 222% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 92.0 10.1190380762 909% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 92.0 10.7795591182 853% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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