It is considered that always telling a truth should not be a necessity. Some people are of the opinion that sometimes telling a lie can be helpful for a person to come out from the troubles. I completely agree with this statement, since integrity and realism can sometimes bring nothing, but destroy to people.
To commence with, there are various circumstances where falsehood has proved advantageous for others. To cite an example, patients who suffer from cancer usually encouraged by doctors and family members. In these situations, the falsehood can be proved as a placebo to provide a peaceful frame of mind. Although falsehood appears to be wrong at first sight, it is indeed the best thing to do.
Another reason to support this point is that white lies are innocuous and can be socially beneficial. To cite an example, if someone cooks manually for us, it is our responsibility to give good complement whether it is delicious or not. Therefore, telling a lie is valuable for maintaining the relationship.
However, falsehood is accepted or even recommended in some situation. Honestly is still a virtue that we should all embrace. A man who is known for the condor having more respected in society than a man lying habitually.
I would like to reiterate that falsehood should be implemented in some situations. Every person should have an attribute of honesty to do the best in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vantageous for others To cite an example patients who suffer from cancer usually ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, honestly, however, if, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83829787234 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80803993477 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 235.0 20.2975951904 1158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1137.0 106.682146367 1066% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 235.0 20.7667163134 1132% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 55.0 7.06120827912 779% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179085094773 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179085094773 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978186844866 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991408340454 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 118.9 13.0946893788 908% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -167.05 50.2224549098 -333% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 94.9 11.3001002004 840% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.06 8.58950901804 222% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 96.0 10.1190380762 949% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 95.0 10.7795591182 881% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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