Wilderness endorsement is not exclusively about the exotic varieties of animal by-products that we showcase on a ramp walk or ostentatiously exhibit a predilection for the animal prints and ornaments embellished with the animal graphics -- what else could be ascribed to the passion that we as a human can posses on wild animals? As there is only few leftovers of species around the world, while there may be habitats that are still preserved naturally without human interruptions, it is surely the responsibility of each nation to protect the endangered animals and species by passing essential laws. In fact, the prompt proposes an essential idea to encumber illegal activities against the wilderness by generating new laws to save the remains of wilderness in each nation. The concern about wilderness is not only attributed to saving the natural habitat but also protecting the ecosystem of a habitat as a whole.
Despite passing several laws, government still faces issues around all kinds of ecosystem. In fact, more stringent laws is the need of the hour to eradicate deforestation and encroachment in to the territory of any species. Humans encroach the space allotted for animals as the avarice for acquisition of land is still a fundamental principle of mankind. A recent survey shows that more than 75% of the earth's natural habitat has already been demolished by human interruptions and the remaining 25% of the resources are to be exploited by humans within a span of 40 years. Also as suggested by most of the environmentalists, it is high time to preserve the leftover and start with a resurgence in establishing a much greener earth for the generations to come. If policies and policymakers ignored the groundwork for restoring the nature, then there will be an immense loophole in the ecosystem wherein even humans are susceptible to extinction.
Furthermore, poachers and animal hunters hunt down wild animals for their cupidity towards acquiring a lucrative profit. Even though, there are several body to monitor and administrate the forests, nowadays even the forest officers are not loyal to their responsibilities. They bribe in money and let the poachers hunt down rare species just for the sake to eke more monetary benefits. However, the basic reason behind these activities are the greediness humans posses and the wide range of markets created for these animal by-products around the world. To exemplify, When Lady Gaga or Katy Perry promotes a truly made product out of a crocodile skin as engrossed by the major leather manufacturing companies like the Louis Vuitton, a commoner is carried away by the adorned styles. In fact, they are even fascinated by the products and are ready to buy them without considering the raw materials used. Nations must initiate laws to ban such engrossment and manufacturers to tackle this dire situation where most of the wilderness are intentionally killed for their skin, horns, tusks and much more to be used a base material for international brands generating consumer products.
Moreover, there are other self centered reasons to initiate laws for the sake of the humans rather than emphasizing on the importance of wilderness. When more and more territory is occupied by humans, there are high chance for the wilder to trespass in to the human settlements. Thus, causing tumult and tremors to the humans who are not supposed to be a part of the jungle settlement. In most part of the world there are animals trespassing the national highways and human establishments, just because it has been their usual route to be followed as a perfunctory ritual to rummage for food or water in the forest premises. In India, there are cases where tigers encroached in to school premises and threatened the students, fortunately been encountered by forest ranger's timely action. Such was the case in South east countries, where wild elephants were seen to dilapidate a village, thereby creating chaos all over for the humans. In case, these incidents were not addressed properly by the government then there are possibilities in future for animals to coexist along with the humans, each of them mutually threatening the other's existence.
To conclude, in my opinion, wilderness and human beings need laws that mutually benefit each other. Besides, each of the species that exist in the world survive best in their allocated spaces and it is purely the duty of the rulers to ensure if the necessary is articulated efficiently across the ecosystem.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nts embellished with the animal graphics what else could be ascribed to the passi...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'laws'' or 'law's'?
Suggestion: laws'; law's
...tat as a whole Despite passing several laws government still faces issues around al...
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Suggestion:
...ven humans are susceptible to extinction Furthermore poachers and animal hunters ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun body seems to be countable; consider using: 'several bodies'.
Suggestion: several bodies
... lucrative profit Even though there are several body to monitor and administrate the forests...
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Suggestion:
...animals to coexist along with the humans each of them mutually threatening the ot...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... each of them mutually threatening the others existence To conclude in my opinion w...
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Line 4, column 1131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...utually threatening the others existence To conclude in my opinion wilderness and...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...culated efficiently across the ecosystem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, thus, while, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 109.0 58.6224719101 186% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3708.0 2235.4752809 166% => OK
No of words: 736.0 442.535393258 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03804347826 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.20858137428 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87025992085 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 357.0 215.323595506 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485054347826 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1217.7 704.065955056 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 736.0 23.0359550562 3195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 3708.0 118.986275619 3116% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 736.0 23.4991977007 3132% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 113.0 5.21951772744 2165% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127209779161 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127209779161 0.0831039109588 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798667667079 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335231287735 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 370.3 14.1392134831 2619% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -684.02 48.8420337079 -1400% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 291.5 12.1743820225 2394% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.43 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 44.48 8.38706741573 530% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 202.0 100.480337079 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 11.8971910112 504% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 296.4 11.2143820225 2643% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 11.7820224719 509% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nts embellished with the animal graphics what else could be ascribed to the passi...
^^
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'laws'' or 'law's'?
Suggestion: laws'; law's
...tat as a whole Despite passing several laws government still faces issues around al...
^^^^
Line 2, column 933, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ven humans are susceptible to extinction Furthermore poachers and animal hunters ...
^^^
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun body seems to be countable; consider using: 'several bodies'.
Suggestion: several bodies
... lucrative profit Even though there are several body to monitor and administrate the forests...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1075, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...animals to coexist along with the humans each of them mutually threatening the ot...
^^
Line 4, column 1115, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... each of them mutually threatening the others existence To conclude in my opinion w...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...utually threatening the others existence To conclude in my opinion wilderness and...
^^^
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...culated efficiently across the ecosystem
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, thus, while, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 109.0 58.6224719101 186% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3708.0 2235.4752809 166% => OK
No of words: 736.0 442.535393258 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03804347826 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.20858137428 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87025992085 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 357.0 215.323595506 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485054347826 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1217.7 704.065955056 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 736.0 23.0359550562 3195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 3708.0 118.986275619 3116% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 736.0 23.4991977007 3132% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 113.0 5.21951772744 2165% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127209779161 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127209779161 0.0831039109588 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798667667079 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335231287735 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 370.3 14.1392134831 2619% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -684.02 48.8420337079 -1400% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 291.5 12.1743820225 2394% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.43 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 44.48 8.38706741573 530% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 202.0 100.480337079 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 11.8971910112 504% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 296.4 11.2143820225 2643% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 11.7820224719 509% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.