Over the course of history, leadership roles have been dominated by male workers. It has been suggested that women are not suitable for these positions. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Over the long period of time , the responsible of leading the team was taken by man and there was harly no given opportunities to women . many people believed that , man can do that better then women but personally i totally disagree with that because i consider that both gender have their own distinctive merits and women should be given more oppotinities to get promoted in workplace
Firstly , it's very important that the leader can see the issue with different lens and Women have demonstrated the possibility of wearing many hats.--(Compared to men, women have essential skill and potentials to become leaders), In the public environment( in the community) , it easy to emerge diverse opinions which can break the solidarity if the leader can create the suited environment . bosses have to analyse each idea and pay attention to members' views without the bias and can make it clearer to the rest in the group . If the leader has a hard voice , whether they are on purpose or not , it will make the member afraid of contributing the opinion next time .
It was showed that there are no differences in the effectiveness between two genders, a famous airline brand of viet nam was leaded by nguyen thi thao - a young age women with the her shaped views and the passion to improve equality she show up her gifted leading nature in viet nam , like thao , there are many women are paying effort to make the world of work better for woman, and change the old views of the gender of leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61776061776 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46083800307 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 259.0 20.2975951904 1276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1196.0 106.682146367 1121% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 259.0 20.7667163134 1247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.0 7.06120827912 467% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917357086912 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917357086912 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632905888421 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028593805017 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 129.8 13.0946893788 991% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -182.95 50.2224549098 -364% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 103.1 11.3001002004 912% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.0 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.78 8.58950901804 230% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 105.6 10.1190380762 1044% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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