Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The importance of parents and school life has captured public attention due to its implication in children’s manners. given the suggestion that children should be taught how to become a good member of society by their parents, while others believe that it should come from school responsibility. there is a need to look at both of these views.
On the one hand, parents' teaching plays an essential role in children’s manner development. First, since children learn everything about life such as the norms or behavior by imitating their parent's actions, being conclusive to form personality traits at an early age. In fact, it is a natural comprehension of children whether their parents have the intention to teach them or not. Secondly, kids spend most of the time with their parents. As a result, parents are the one who could give advice through each stage of a kid's development, teaching their kids what it’s right and suitable to become a good person constantly. Finally, because family is a small society, parents could teach the children how to show respect for them, which contributes greatly to becoming a good person in society by respecting others.
On the other hand, some people believe that school is the ideal place for teaching everything. Initially, by providing academic knowledge which is crucial to life, children have opportunities to learn and become well-educated people. Therefore, children in prospect could contribute to their country by their knowledge and talents based on what they learn at schools, becoming a valuable member of society. Moreover, school is the place where kids interact and communicate with their peers, and teachers could teach them how to behave and cooperate with others by celebrating several activities in class, promoting children's collaboration ability in society.
To sum up, I think that both of these views are satisfactory and it is not the responsibility of any party alone but it should be the reconcile combination of both parents and schools to make children become good members of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 510, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
...uld give advice through each stage of a kids development teaching their kids what it...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ity of any party alone but it should be the reconcile combination of both parents and schools...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in fact, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06886227545 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74503224954 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 334.0 20.2975951904 1646% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1693.0 106.682146367 1587% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 334.0 20.7667163134 1608% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 155.0 7.06120827912 2195% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417447705449 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.417447705449 0.084324248473 495% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283416092757 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494313606355 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 169.4 13.0946893788 1294% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -267.53 50.2224549098 -533% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 133.5 11.3001002004 1181% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.61 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.99 8.58950901804 268% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 135.6 10.1190380762 1340% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.7795591182 529% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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