It's thought that the most effective method of crime reduction is to boost parenting skills awareness on parents. I totally agree on this idea. In this essay I will discuss how parenting skill lesson will decrease crime rates that are commit by young people.
Nowadays a lot of crimes are commit by a young group of community member's. A lot of reasons are mentioned on public panel's, on research's as a cause of adolescent guys crime action increment. Currently a lot of college's are providing parenting skill lesson's. The lesson includes' what thing's attract young people, what are the most common behaviors of adolescent guy's, how to teach good habit's, how to far them from a crime actions, how to protect their kid's from the negative impact of movies, social medias.
Currently almost 80% of adolescent guy's spent most of their time by watching movie's and using social medias. On most movie's it's common to look smuggling of drug, drug user's, robberies', abduction, harassment. Plus to that on social media the youngster's will communicate with different guys, so those guy's will lead them for different type of crime commitment. The responsibility of parent's is great to protect their kid's from all this pushing factor's.
In order to do this parent's should take lesson's of proper usage of social media, the way's of identifying negative's from the positive ; For instance on the movies they look creating awareness on them how to identify the wrong and the write.
to conclude; taking lesson's of parenting skill will dicrease the crime that are commit by young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68441064639 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45875047296 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494296577947 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 263.0 20.2975951904 1296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1495.0 106.682146367 1401% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 263.0 20.7667163134 1266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 7.06120827912 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243664863394 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.243664863394 0.084324248473 289% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162539504215 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795728694816 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 136.8 13.0946893788 1045% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -187.01 50.2224549098 -372% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 104.7 11.3001002004 927% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.14 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.28 8.58950901804 236% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 107.2 10.1190380762 1059% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 137.0 10.7795591182 1271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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