agree or disagree? parents learn more from their children
Since the dawn of the civilization, people were trying to learn from each other even in tough situation. I strongly believe that in modern era, parents learn children more than children learn from parents. In what follows, two conspicuous reasons will vindicate my stand point.
To begin with, of course there are some who argue that nowadays children learn from parent more than parents pick up a lot of experience and lessons from children since young people are so immature. I think this is a miss-guiding idea. As current world is going to develop in science and technology, children have a lot of opportunity to communicate with the whole world. Consequently, individuals and media who they see in internet taught a lot of experience which parents are not able to see them because there didn't use to use the social media. For instance, when I was a little boy, I learned in internet how can I cook a special food which my mother did not know that. I received the recipe from the internet. As a result of receiving it, I initiate to make it. My mother ate it and acclaim me because of that meal. After a while, she asked me to share that recipe with her, so I knew I learned him something useful.
Furthermore, today's young people have a lot of relationship with their friends. As a result of that, they pick up many practical lessons which aid them in their life. When parents see that lessons and experience, they learn it from them. I think my own experience is a compelling example for it. When my parent and I embark on a vacation for spending our leisure time, we figure out that we need to make a boat. No one in my family except me doesn't know how to make it. My father asked me how you learned it. I told him that one of my friends taught me.
This example demonstrate that how having a lot of friends can caused parents to learn by their children.
In conclusion, I subscribe to the idea that on modern era parents learn more from their children. This is because, children access to internet and other social media and also they communicate with a lot of friend who help them to gain some useful information and experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, of course, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43556701031 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47496096281 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432989690722 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 388.0 20.1344086022 1927% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1721.0 100.406767564 1714% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 388.0 20.6045352989 1883% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 123.0 5.45110844103 2256% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340302315036 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.340302315036 0.076458572812 445% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246210207046 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746398032274 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 193.5 11.7677419355 1644% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -305.42 58.1214874552 -525% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 152.3 10.1575268817 1499% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.95 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.96 8.01818996416 311% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 10.002688172 530% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 157.2 10.0537634409 1564% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.247311828 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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