In this era of competition world the main focus of every nation is grow more and more. Presently, many administrator think that economic progress is essential for a country. By contrast, others think that other progress also imperative. Here, I would like to account both the view points with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support the former view, First and foremost, economic growth play phenomenal role to uplift the standard of nation's people. To illustrate, government can enhance the salary of working employees if they have hefty amount of money. Apart from it, in thriving nation, people can take much relief from tax side department as government put less tax on public due to the economic growth and the price of domestic things automatically reduce.Therefore, masses can imagine a better life under the economic growth of a country.
Numerous points can be mentioned in the latter view. Initially, it is significant for every nation to focus on the progress in health system and education system, unemployment rather than economy progress. For example, in my country majority of masses are unemployed due to less working facility and destitute people find difficulties to maintain their health as the price of medicine touch the sky, more education will definitely enhance the economy of a country.Thus, a nation with healthy people can progress more and well educated people with jobs will prove a helping hand for a nation if some changes is occurring in this field.
To recuperate, Undeniably, Economic growth of a country help people in every field. However, still I believe that money is not important compare to health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
In this era of competition world the main focus of every nation is grow more and more P...
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Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...world the main focus of every nation is grow more and more Presently many administra...
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Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun administrator seems to be countable; consider using: 'many administrators'.
Suggestion: many administrators
... nation is grow more and more Presently many administrator think that economic progress is essenti...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eld To recuperate Undeniably Economic growth of a country help people in every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04814814815 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68810569147 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 270.0 20.2975951904 1330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1363.0 106.682146367 1278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 270.0 20.7667163134 1300% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 83.0 7.06120827912 1175% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28826651397 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.28826651397 0.084324248473 342% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172263181249 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626330671798 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 137.4 13.0946893788 1049% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -202.57 50.2224549098 -403% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 108.6 11.3001002004 961% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.49 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.71 8.58950901804 241% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 110.0 10.1190380762 1087% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.7795591182 529% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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