Governments throughout the world believe that their most significant purpose is economy while some people argue that other targets have the same importance for a country. I believe that economic progress is an important target but there are numbers of others have the same level of importance.
On the one hand, economic targets play a significant role in our life which has many impacts on every aspects of life are the main reason why many governments think that the most important target of is economy. Most qualities of our life are affected sharply by economic. For example, in developed countries, their GDP index which is always in high level makes the happiness of their resident increase much in recent years. Additionally, there are various values could be also affected by impacts of economy such as education or environment. As an instance, undeveloped countries with a weak economy always have a low-quality education for children.
On the other hand, I would agree with the idea that other progress have equally value with economy for a country. Although the effects of a weak economy, there are many countries have a great quality of life which is the most important purpose of these countries. In fact, Bhutan, an Asian country, has deleted GDP index, changed into happiness index as the most significant target and became the place where the percentage of crime is lowest. Furthermore, it is undeniable that other progress such as pollution index or the safety of resident also have important roles in our life. For instance, countries which have a great economy such as USA or China are the place have billions tons of CO2 emission every year. Therefore, the proportion of people there always have medical problem is always high.
In conclusion, I believe that economy is one of the most important purposes but there are many other target also makes great impacts on our life which government should pay more attention for.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'targets'?
Suggestion: targets
...rtant purposes but there are many other target also makes great impacts on our life wh...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91049382716 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51735895298 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422839506173 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 324.0 20.2975951904 1596% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1591.0 106.682146367 1491% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 324.0 20.7667163134 1560% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 127.0 7.06120827912 1799% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326623038323 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.326623038323 0.084324248473 387% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227767433046 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670059764397 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 163.7 13.0946893788 1250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -257.38 50.2224549098 -512% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 129.7 11.3001002004 1148% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.68 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.58 8.58950901804 263% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 131.6 10.1190380762 1301% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'targets'?
Suggestion: targets
...rtant purposes but there are many other target also makes great impacts on our life wh...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91049382716 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51735895298 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422839506173 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 324.0 20.2975951904 1596% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1591.0 106.682146367 1491% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 324.0 20.7667163134 1560% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 127.0 7.06120827912 1799% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326623038323 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.326623038323 0.084324248473 387% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227767433046 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670059764397 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 163.7 13.0946893788 1250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -257.38 50.2224549098 -512% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 129.7 11.3001002004 1148% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.68 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.58 8.58950901804 263% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 131.6 10.1190380762 1301% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.