A neighbor recently invited to you a special party. You intended to go, but at the last minute were unable to attend. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
1. apologize for not going to a party
2. explain why you didn't go
3. suggest a way to make up for missing the party
Dear Mr. Jones,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. I felt sorry for not coming to your auspicious party because I got a message from my manager that I have to travel out of town for a business trip.
At your special event day, I got a message about my promotion in the firm where I work for the last half a decade. I become a senior partner at Pearson Hardman. I was extremely joyful after hearing this news and wanted to celebrate with you on your special day. However, I had to attend the meeting with the managing partner who lives out of town.
The reason I did not came that night because an agreement needs to be signed in front of the managing partner. He had to leave the country on the next day around evening. Thus, I only had a chance to set up a meeting as early as possible. Certainly, I did meet him in the morning at his home. Besides, our company has the policy to make such promotions in three working days.
I thought this is the right time to turn my life around by expediting and completing in the process of my senior partnership agreement. Due to this, I could not come to your party. I hope you will understand that how important it was for me to grab this opportunity. Therefore, I apologize for canceling your special event at your place. And, I have decided to make by taking you to dinner at a new Japanese restaurant since your love to eat sushi.
I am hoping for a positive response from your end.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o travel out of town for a business trip At your special event day I got a messag...
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e managing partner who lives out of town The reason I did not came that night bec...
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Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...ives out of town The reason I did not came that night because an agreement needs t...
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Line 4, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke such promotions in three working days I thought this is the right time to turn...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... restaurant since your love to eat sushi I am hoping for a positive response from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, therefore, thus, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 283.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2296819788 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36472598392 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 283.0 16.3608247423 1730% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1197.0 76.5299724578 1564% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 283.0 16.8248392259 1682% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 49.0 4.34317383033 1128% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236172185899 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236172185899 0.0766984524023 308% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126431323522 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652602160036 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 140.0 8.37731958763 1671% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -198.85 70.7449484536 -281% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 111.3 7.45979381443 1492% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.73 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.91 7.59969072165 262% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 8.62886597938 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 115.2 8.54432989691 1348% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 52.0 8.15463917526 638% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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