Indubitably, the traditional way to solving crimes is putting prisoners behind the bars. It is often argued that there is a best solution to solve these problems via giving the best education instead of practicing traditional ways of punishing people. And, I firmly concur with this notion.
Apparently, prison is not only the answer for committing serious crimes but also such crimes are a risk to society, such as murderers, sexual harassment, and terrorist attacks to a nation. The government should maintain a different special cell for such cold-hearted criminals. In this way, they will be treated with appropriate vocational training and education. Besides, it is well-known fact that the basic causes of crimes are poverty, illiteracy, and unemployment. Therefore, if education and job training is given to criminals to rise the economic and employment sectors of a country.
Moreover, the government spends a high amount of funds in taking care of prisoners. Instead of spoon-feeding themselves in jail, we should provide open rehabilitated centers. For instance, minor criminals are served in some community projects after getting a better education and vocational training in the prison. Therefore, educating and providing small jobs to these prisoners can become a meaningful contribution to society in terms of building infrastructure and reducing crimes in modern society.
To recapitulate, imprisoning criminals may be a good way to solve crimes, but there are better ways to reduce such crimes by providing education and job training to rehabilitate the criminals. As a result, people who commit crimes should not be sent to prison and focus on reforming these people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...e bars It is often argued that there is a best solution to solve these problems v...
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Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rehabilitating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: rehabilitating
...by providing education and job training to rehabilitate the criminals As a result people who co...
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Line 4, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ison and focus on reforming these people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2927756654 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95137870625 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54752851711 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 263.0 20.2975951904 1296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1392.0 106.682146367 1305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 263.0 20.7667163134 1266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 106.0 7.06120827912 1501% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280643705805 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.280643705805 0.084324248473 333% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18359168925 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562519482696 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 135.0 13.0946893788 1031% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -203.93 50.2224549098 -406% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 107.0 11.3001002004 947% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.88 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.88 8.58950901804 243% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 107.2 10.1190380762 1059% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 107.0 10.7795591182 993% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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