In this contemporary world, some residential areas in metropolises are created by high-rise towers while others made of houses consuming much space. However, in my opinion, I firmly believe that taller buildings will provide better accommodations for people in cities.
There are several reasons to support that the approach of constructing sky-scrapers in the megacities will be beneficial to residents. To begin with, the fact nowadays the population in metro cities has been increasing rapidly as individuals are coming from small towns to make their careers. Subsequently, the residential areas do not have an ample amount of living space for old as well as new locals in the cities. With this effect on living in metropolises, the government authorities have taken initiatives to build taller apartment buildings and create residential societies for sustaining the population in cities by creating spaces for living that consume less space and accommodate more people. Moreover, the sky-scraping apartments are better construction for locals who are living in megacities as it covers the same area as an individual house.
Another reason for supporting the skyscraper's construction because middle-class persons can afford apartments instead of big space houses like bungalows. Furthermore, living in flats builds social relationships with neighbors which is a positive development of society. Thus, building high-rise towers in residential societies is one of the most effective ways to construct house areas for modern society.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that building taller apartment buildings is a more reasonable and feasible way to create housing where multiple families can get shelter with all amenities such as gym, outdoor and indoor sports complex, and swimming pool in their societies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'skyscrapers'' or 'skyscraper's'?
Suggestion: skyscrapers'; skyscraper's
...se. Another reason for supporting the skyscrapers construction because middle-class perso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as for, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6204379562 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06750033647 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2879256903 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309887254838 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110842367403 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699564590114 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20605953657 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685354130444 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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