In some societies the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, Crime has most controversial topic and specially, when doing by juvenile. It is bitter truth more and more crime rate enrich. Only one solution for reduce ratio. It is giving punishment same as younger and adult. I agree with this topic and my inclination articulated through subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, There are various types of reason for teenagers doing crimes. First and most has youngsters always tend to do crime for shortage of money. They are doing crimes such as robberies, stealing, therefore, police should give same punishment as a younger offenders. Because, when new juvenile try to do that always feel scare.
Secondly, Teenagers, who has done major felony always not treat polite due to the fact it is showed incorrect message to other youngster, and they are committing more and more crime. It has extremely essential to give them hard punishment, thus other juvenile far from this critical crisis and become aware about a crime drawbacks. For instance, In a one country also impose one law by government and showed beneficial. Adolescents, who has done major crime always get hard punishment, therefor crime rate pit fall.
To conclude, This major problem tackled by government and parents always learn lesson about crime. However, children have done petty crime always sort out problem with explain their drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...same punishment as a younger offenders. Because, when new juvenile try to do that alway...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25114155251 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62457396206 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625570776256 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7584306278 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217269811513 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711058884304 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445926259185 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12675638141 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298440104805 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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