Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music is becoming increasingly popular in the world. A few people assume that music is best way of bonding people of different cultures and ages together. I agree with the above statement to the large extent and the following paragraphs will explain in detail.
Music is gateway to celebrate, entertain with people of different background and age group. Music helps us to engage with the people of different cultures and age group to become closer with each to celebrate, entertain on their occassion of their festivals, joy, sad moments. For example, people used to dance on the occassion of lohori in Punjab to celebrate the seasons of farming. Thus, music helps to become together with people of different cultures and age group.
Music enables us to communicate and connect with people of different culture, language and age group. Music can became the medium of connecting and communicating with different people which enables us to understand each other feelings. For example, Korean pop songs are becoming popular in the world even though, in many countries Korean is not their native language. To conclude, music helps us to communicate and connect with people of various background and age group.
To conclude, music is the popular entertaining medium around the world. Some people believed that music is the best way to closing the gap between persons of different backgrounds and age group. In my opinion, music is the medium to fill the gap between people of different cultures, tradition and age group by providing a gateway of entertainment, celebration among the people. It can also be medium to connect and communicate with people of different cultures, languages and age group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15162454874 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72755090588 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425992779783 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5995504145 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382517038591 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170490394079 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100779319489 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27416780996 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469064323549 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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