Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Eniviromental issues are increasingly becoming popular. Few people assumes that the current major enviroment problem is the extinction of flora amd fauna, while others say that there are various enviromental problems except these. This essay will discuss the aforementation issues in following paragraph before drawing conclusion .
one of the current main enviromental problem are the loss of habitat and extinction of plants and animals.These issues are increasing because animals and plants numbers are decrasing rapidly alongwith , there habitat and survival are distrubing.For example, one horn rhino are only 123 in number left around the world.Thus, extinction of flora and fauna is the major issues in present.
The various enviromental issues that we are facing are deforestation , climate change.People are cutting down forest areas for agriculture cultivation which had resulted in deforestation alongwith , the temperature of earth and sea level is rising.For example, Amazon which is one the largest forest area of the world lost almost 20 percent of its total area due to deforestation.To conclude, enviromental problems of deforestation and climate change had became serious issues.
To conclude, enviromental problems are becoming challenging to resolve.This essay discussed the current major enviroment problem of loss lifes of animals and plants and various other enviromental issues like deforestation and climate change.In my opinion, enviroment problems of deforestation ,climate change are becoming difficult to tackle and its effects are becoming evident along with the extinction of plants and animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, while, as for, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97457627119 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20996711648 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529661016949 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.438593949 49.4020404114 337% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 235.0 106.682146367 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.3333333333 20.7667163134 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170964110401 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875854057858 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766240903479 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113368194933 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555053542462 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.51 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.94 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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