The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres. It is feared that this could have a negative influence on the young and society.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is argued that young people nowadays spend too much their spare time in shopping malls. This could have adverse impacts on them and society. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this view with several reasons that will be discussed below.
Firstly, the young may neglect their study ar schools and universities. To elaborate, they concentrate on shopping anything they want and they are becoming shopaholics in the coming future. In addition to that, their free time is to relax after working hard, and hence they waste time on shopping centers. They not only spend too much time, but also they pay more money for something such as clothes, grocery, and watches. As a result, they do not focus on study carefully, and they can get low scores in any exams as compare to other students at school.
Secondly, young people are contributing to throw-away society due to shopping too much. If their peers have anything, they will purchase it without thinking. In some situations, youngsters buy many products from major brands, but they never use once or they claim that these products are old-fashionable. As a consequence, a large deal of clothes and items will get rid of the environment which leads to pollutions due to plastic and cloth waste.
In conclusion, these days, the young waste their leisure time in shopping centers which is a controversial issue in contemporary society. I am of the opinion that the young's parents should encourage them partake some useful clubs in free time to enhance social skills that will more helpful for them rather than going to shopping malls. If youngsters have a smart timetable, they will not waste their time in pointless activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96113074205 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62438331444 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590106007067 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8025449126 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241349262744 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895002265154 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592610519404 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166069219233 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935635073976 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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