Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent you agree or disagree?
Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent you agree or disagree?
A topical issue in modern society is children-related advertisement. It is argued that advertising for children should be prohibited. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this view for several reasons that will be discussed below.
There are two main reasons why I strongly disagree. Firstly, many children usually watch advertising on television for recreational purposes. For example, they watch toy review videos on after finishing their lessons. Secondly, children can know about products for educational purposes. For instance, many bookstores choose advertising to promote fascinating books to readers, and children have many choices before purchasing.
A further reason why I would argue that advertising aimed at children should be banned, it is not realistic. In fact, the companies only manufacture children items which base on advertisement to boost the quantity of products and increase profit. In addition, they have to select positive contents to post, and advertising is rarely risky for children. However, some children choose violent and hazardous advertisement to watch.
In conclusion, advertising for children is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. I am of the opinion that parents need to control negative contents when their children watch and avoid misbehavior. If children live in a good society, they will obtain achievements in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to advertise'.
Suggestion: to advertise
...s. For instance, many bookstores choose advertising to promote fascinating books to readers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5807860262 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07755254785 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615720524017 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4986001531 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.1764705882 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4705882353 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384486915116 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140478280908 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159398182098 0.0667982634062 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299265919232 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.2965236208 0.056905535591 521% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.49 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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