it is universally believed that having a healthy and rich financial situation is the major route to bring joyfulness to your life. In my perspective, posing a considerable amount of money can satisfy people in many ways. However, countless non-materialistic features would be a happening reason for many people.
It is an irrefutable fact that money can make a life a breeze and aid people enjoy their lives to a high extent. It is globally accepted that money offers peace, welfare and security. Without having a potent financial background people are unable to educate, travel or progress in their lives. I truly believe that wealthiness can guarantee some great moments in your life including travelling abroad, living in luxurious houses or experiencing novel costly activities. According to a recent survey conducted by Canadian scientists published in explore the world magazine it has been claimed that people who are from rich families with second to none facilities will witness impulsive behavior's, depression and anxiety far less than individuals with poor financial background. Consequently, with no doubt, since affluent people are less stressed out in their life and they have a chance to try whatever they desire without being worry about financial matters they will have a more glorious, fruitful life to live.
Despite all the favorable aspects money could offer to everyone's life, in my estimation, although money plays a vital role in peoples' life and it can be a stress-reliever happy-making factor, I suppose there are a host of blessings in everyone's life which they are free and you can be delighted with them. First and foremost, I believe having a loving and caring family who always holds your back can be an endless source of happiness. Along with this enjoying being in a circle of friends who are always willing to give you a helping hand and they can lift your spirit up while you are down in the dumps is deemed as another cause of happiness. On top of all these mentioned facts, being healthy is the most imperative factor in every individuals' life, without it even being a millionaire can not make you a happy person. Let me encapsulate my presented explanations by illustrating a fact from the book Happy as a Dane. in this book Annie Tomas the author, has explained that the considerable reason behind this fact that why Danish people are the happiest people in the world is that they are not a victim of the hedonic treadmill. To put it clearly, they believe if they want to find a reason to be happy they will be like a hamster on a wheel and they will never reach happiness so they are satisfied and happy with what they hold and they follow a hedonistic point of view.
By way of conclusion, while money plays a key role in regard to people's level of happiness in life, there are several free blessings in people's lives that can bring them huge pleasure such as healthiness, family and friends.
- You work for an international company You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job Write a letter to your manager In your letter describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to hel 81
- A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university He asked for your advice about studying this subject Write a letter to your friend In your letter 1 Give details of the course 2 Explain why you recommend the univ 78
- Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money Write a letter to the local council in you letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisur 78
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job You think he she should get a job Write a letter to this friend In your letter say why he she would not enjoy going to college explain why 78
- A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money either to sponsor a local children s sports team for two years or to pay for two open air concerts It has asked for feedback from the general public Write a letter to the company 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, second, so, while, i suppose, no doubt, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2441.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 502.0 315.596192385 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8625498008 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74621444586 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52390438247 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 770.4 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3918713619 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.588235294 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5294117647 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36997149363 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119986066053 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805656192387 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233269987875 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488776754358 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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