Throghout the last decades, a considerable number of global events happen all across the globe. Sport events, which is played among the different countries and nations, are gaining popularity day after day. In the modern day, a lot of people believe that hosting an international sport event has more disadvantages than advantages for the country. Whereas another group of people believe that they has plenty of beneficial aspects for the local people and country whcih I agree with.
On the one hand, a great deal of money must be spent on security needs due to criminal intentioned terrorists who wants to cause a damage. Therefore, military forces must be recruited to ensure that everything is undercontrol and there will not be any safety problems for visitors and local citizens. Furthermore, some aggressive people could make the ground battlefield and exacerbate the situation as their favourite team loses. Moreover, such a large amount of money can be spent on different problems of host country. For example, it can be used for improving the life quality of local folk, building new facilities and so on.
On the other hand, hosting an international event brings popularity to the country and enhances its economy. A lot of tourists come to the country for supporting their team and visiting foreign country. During their visit, the local folk observes a noticeable growth in their sales. Moreover, such events brings entertainment and fun for the people. They get a chance to see and support their favourite team or players. Additionally, it is also a new chance for the both local folk and tourist to meet with new people, understand their culture and improve own outlook.
To conclude, however there are some risks and prices of hosting an international sports event, its benefits, such as improvements in economy, entertaining games, outweigh the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 399, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...other group of people believe that they has plenty of beneficial aspects for the lo...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'damage'.
Suggestion: damage
...tentioned terrorists who wants to cause a damage. Therefore, military forces must be rec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17049180328 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81375666183 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586885245902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8707221551 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240724499099 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766880964053 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718842149125 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149482285525 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066318756422 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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