The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries
The table illustrates data and proposed population in percentage from 65 and above age category in three different countries.
Overall it is clear that the lowest percentage of population was seemed in UK among all the given time periods, whereas in Germany this proportion was the highest in the same years and predicted to remain unchanged in having a largest population in 2030.
To compare the years 1988 and 2000,Canada, Germany and UK did not experienced a big change in percentage of inhecity(aged 65 and older). It is also evident that in both of these years United Kingdom had a mere 14.23% and 14.89%, respectively. Furthermore, Canada's population showed 16.32% for the year of 1988 and well over the 20% in 2000, while population in Germany constituted 20.45% in 1988 and 25.32% for 2000 years.
Focusing in 2030, we can see that order in raising of population aged 65 and higher will not be changed among the given three countries. - 26.35% in Canada, about 41% in Germany and fewer about 10% than the former area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...predicted to remain unchanged in having a largest population in 2030. To compa...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'experience'
Suggestion: experience
...and 2000,Canada, Germany and UK did not experienced a big change in percentage of inhecitya...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n Canada, about 41% in Germany and fewer about 10% than the former area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90285714286 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73386986184 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605714285714 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.212282549 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259385040013 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117119772174 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108732555755 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169555664691 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972256918062 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.