Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing regarding one of your appliances I have bought recently from one of your company's branch which is located at 24 street.
About one month ago I bought a mixer for my job and I have been using it for almost 2 weeks and it has been three days that I confront difficulty with this equipment. To clear things up, I am a chef making cakes at home and I use this equipment for mixing the primary ingredients of the cake such as flour, milk and eggs. Unfortunately, in these three days when I turn on this device after 30 seconds, it becomes extremely hot which prevent me to continue working with it.
In fact, I should prepare almost 10 birthday cakes for the bakery I am cooperating with and I am deeply in need of this device. Yesterday I did my work without it and I could not fulfil the orders the bakery has given to me. I think this malfunctioning device would bring me undesirable consequences such as losing my job.
It would be great if you consider my case as an emergency one and send A repairman to fix the problem of this device. alternatively, if you think it takes more than three days to repair it please send me another mixer.
You can reach me via e-mail at hivafara77@gmail.com for further information.
I am eager to earn your feedback as soon as possible.
Respectfully yours,
Hiva Farahani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I hope this letter finds you well. I am wr...
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Line 8, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Alternatively
...rman to fix the problem of this device. alternatively, if you think it takes more than three ...
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Line 8, column 190, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pleases'?
Suggestion: pleases
...takes more than three days to repair it please send me another mixer. You can reach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, second, so, well, i think, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50787401575 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7849120294 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8624855156 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0769230769 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297141032044 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084766253494 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481936165755 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12958725628 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628574736684 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.