Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world What are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions

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Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.

What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.

Submitted by Tolik on Mon, 05/03/2021 - 23:21

According to recent studies, the number of crime has decreased considerably. However, some researchers indicate that despite this significant reduction, juvenile delinquency is rising quickly worldwide. In this essay, I will consider a list of reasons for this increment and suggest possible solutions to it.

Let us start with causes for the sharp increase in the number of young criminals. The first reason is associated with poor upbringing. The majority of youth offenders commit a crime because they come from disadvantaged households as well as are unaware of consequences. They take lessons about life in society, but in prison and with criminal records. Another reason is related to the shortage of money. Many humans break laws, if they cannot find a job and therefore experience a lack of income. Thus, after the analysis of the reasons it is clear that crime among youngsters is acute and needs solving.

Nevertheless, some researchers suggest that the problem cannot be tackled unless people take the following actions. Firstly, governments should provide children with proper parenting in childhood. The way forward could be for officials to attach teachers to troubled families, so that they can teach would-be citizens more about crime and inevitable punishments. Secondly, authorities should ensure employment for young adults. This problem could be addressed, if councils created more workplaces for citizens in their twenties. As a result, after the consideration, it is obvious that the problem with young criminals can be handled effectively.

In conclusion, although there are many reasons why the number of immature lawbreakers is booming now, I believe that it is probable to deal with this negative tendency, if the government adopt the above mentioned measures.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46043165468 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91707767578 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2859049986 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2941176471 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21229539037 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609620584324 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553582766138 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12433895353 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064610265415 0.056905535591 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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