Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns You should include Where you live The problem What he should do

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns.

You should include:

Where you live
The problem
What he should do

Dear Mr. John,

I am writing to complain about certain noise levels from the neighboring apartments, which you own, and your immediate attention in this regard would be highly appreciated.

With regard to my address, I am residing in apartment I-701, The Edge Towers, which is next to other owned apartments by you. I have been living here for three years and I have never been so inconvenient.

As for the noise problem, the new neighbors play loud music late at night and one of them has a tendency to host parties most of the weekends, which creates a lot of nuisance. Due to this, I could not concentrate on my studies and sleep well on time. If they would continue doing this, I am afraid that I will fail my board exams.

In order to fix this issue, I would appreciate it if you could talk to other tenants and ask them to turn down the volume level. Being the owner of the house, I would also like you send them the society guidelines to follow.

I hope for prompt action from you regarding this matter.

Yours sincerely,
Ell

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun nuisance seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of nuisances'.
Suggestion: a lot of nuisances
...ies most of the weekends, which creates a lot of nuisance. Due to this, I could not concentrate o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, well, as for, i am afraid, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55263157895 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43201750431 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668421052632 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8927850495 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180201770742 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650167834858 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530961138091 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100402526525 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610732570725 0.0580467560999 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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