Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing regarding the number of expenditures your organization would spend on two different programs. I will discuss the beneficial features of these two divergent programs separately.
About the sponsorship of a children's sports team, I do think this program would bring many favorable features. To highlight the considerable one I would focus on the fact that this financial aid would help these children to keep shining. As your company is totally aware of the financial situation of these local sports teams, with your help they can continue and even have a supportive as well as competent instructor to flourish in a neat way.
Putting a light on the two-open air concerts would also offer some virtues to the public. Actually, in our country, it is not affordable for every member of society to go to concerts. this program could aid individuals from poor financial background to experience going to concerts and they would enjoy it and it can be a good therapeutic as well as the sole-restoring activity for them to lift their spirit up.
Spending the money to support every public event throughout the country would seem a good idea to follow for every organization. To my perspective if you support the young generation of society they will absolutely bring wonderous honors to our country in the near future as they have the chance to be a champion in three years later in the youth group of football.
I am so grateful that you have this brilliant idea to follow.
Thanks for your attention in this matter.
Respectfully yours,
Hiva Farahani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a neat way" with adverb for "neat"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ell as competent instructor to flourish in a neat way. Putting a light on the two-open air...
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Line 6, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ry member of society to go to concerts. this program could aid individuals from poor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 275.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90545454545 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78267128927 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9459856564 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241306920918 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816556472251 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506971228277 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116851729708 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05520566943 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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