MODERN SHOPPING
Nowadays people buy can buy and sell things or services by means of several methods and modern technologies, not just via traditional ways. In my opinion, that is an excellent novelty for the society.
The new ways of commerce can economize people’s time and they are able to boost variety of chasing products and convenient services. These days the internet is reaching to the countrysides rapidly as well as cities and towns. Also modern technological devices such as smartphones and laptops are becoming popular amongst population. It leads to more developing and spreading of online shops. Shopping on the internet is can be convenient for all layers of people, consumers can save their time. Instead of traveling to markets and shopping malls, they may order their necessary things and couriers bring the orders to own homes or offices.
On the other hand, young people have different taste compared to senior citirens.
Finding themselves size or liked fashions maybe difficult for some kind of people.
Due to using the internet, they can search things over the would find anything which they want.
In short, people live a very busy life nowadays. According to my view, they appreciate the modern methods of trade. In other words, I think every single second is greatly valuable for people these days. Therefore, they don’t want wasting time to travel several shops through traffic jams and they would like large variety of choosing.
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- The line graph and four pie charts illustrate economic increase and spending money on six household categories respectively between1995 and 2010
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- Nowadays people buy can buy and sell things or services by means of several methods and modern technologies not just via traditional ways In my opinion that is an excellent novelty for the society 56
- The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make com
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, i think, in short, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13502109705 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54700684203 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670886075949 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0787115563 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167934288026 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445155707357 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561078031756 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634517508264 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676079756834 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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