Many modern shopping centres are now becoming more popular than local market shops. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this consumer behaviour? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your position.
It is undeniable that the latest shopping malls are more attractive to consumers than local market stores nowadays. This essay will suggest that a vast variety of products is the biggest advantage of this and higher price is the primary disadvantage.
To begin with, the main benefit the modern shopping centres bring to customers is that they offer a great number of products with a visible price so the buyers easily find out whatever they need under one roof. Particularly, all kinds of foods and gadgets such as rice, fruits and electronic devices have been provided there and this satisfies the busy buyers. There is more obvious evidence to show that whatever type of merchandise you used to buy at local shops is offered at modern shopping malls and this lead to consumers saving their time when buying. In contrast, it is inconvenient for consumers if local shops just supply some kind of goods excluding what customer want to buy. Co-op mart is prime example, where we are likely to buy anything we want.
Another point to consider is that the price of some products in shopping centres may be higher than that in small shops outside. This is because the sellers in super market have to pay more expenses than competitors who sell goods at local shops. As a result, they pass these expenditures to buyers in the form of higher price and that is the reason why the local stands still exist. A survey by Nelson showed that the price of the same product in super market is 8% higher than that in local shops. If the traders in shopping centres don’t control the price competitive, their market share will gradually decrease.
To sum up, the up-to-date shopping centres are more and more ubiquitous now because of numerous types of products that it supplies to customers although some certain goods are still more expensive than those in local market shops.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, in contrast, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82608695652 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4052108343 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524844720497 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3799383152 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330045339166 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119307287005 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06721625844 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211319343893 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128548370854 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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