Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Rich countries should not approve more refugees and not supply them with the basic help because this is not only a burden on national budget but also an unpopular policy.
More people who immigrate to a country by the refugee program will increase the demand of the government spending. These are due to expenses on these immigrants’ food and accommodation. Whatever types of expenditures the host nation support for the refugees, the public budget which should have spent for the local people will decrease gradually. Even though it is leading to the deficit of national finance if the government does not keep the balance under control. For example, Germany experienced the difficult period when it had to change its policy about spending for this type of immigrant to protect the financial resource.
Moreover, the policy which opens for the refugees may be unpopular, not because of the allocation of the budget, but more social problems may happen in these states. When the destitute evacuees enter the new countries, they may not adapt the new ways of life there due to different language. This situation brings to some negative effects on the community where they are living. Even some social evils might occur when they struggle with the adversity. For instance, the social unrest from the black in US recently has related to refugees who got the support from the government. For this reason, the local people disagree with this refugee program.
In conclusion, the developed nations should not approve of more refugees to their territory in order to avoid the financial and social consequences that may be harmful to the local residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, even so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10294117647 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58337402766 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566176470588 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1660753555 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.769230769 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144009120413 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530353583955 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584344541163 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107468977868 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586569824907 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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